100 word challenge 11- but then the flash made me, my 33rd piece in 2017

I fell to the ground with a thud! I looked to see the bullies that had punched me down. Next 2 of them got to my feet and the other bashed me again. It was starting to get really hurt. Just when one of the bullies raised his fist I saw the thing that was getting me bashed, a girl the bullies liked and she liked me and she was smiling at me and is like powerful flash. At first I thought nothing would change But the flash made me strong and I took the bullies down. After that I walked to the girl took her hand and walked away.

One thought on “100 word challenge 11- but then the flash made me, my 33rd piece in 2017

  1. Very dramatic! I don’t like to think of you getting bashed!!! Make sure you read your work out loud to yourself so you can notice any grammatical errors as there are a couple in this piece. Great effort with your homework, as always!

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