100 word challenge 18- picture of feet sticking out of water, my 43rd piece in 2017

Drake was just walking down by the river one day, with not a care in the world, thinking about going into high school in just a few weeks. Then he heard a shout for help, he ran to where he heard the shout and ran to the scene to see a little kid getting picked on by a big bully. Drake told him to go away but the bully lunged at him, but drake ducked down and kicked him over his head, and the bully landed head first in the dirty water. The boy thanked him and soon he was famous around his school.

One thought on “100 word challenge 18- picture of feet sticking out of water, my 43rd piece in 2017

  1. Great job, Finn! Remember to read your piece aloud to yourself when you are finished to check your grammar – there are a few places where a full stop might have been better than the comma.
    I have noticed a great improvement in your spelling – well done!
    Mum xo

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