Onomatopoeia and alliteration, break in poem- my 45th piece in 2017

Blam goes my deadly gun.

Crash, splash my target falls into the pool.

Boom, Kradoom, my bomb detonates.

Thump, I land inside the vault.

Chunk, ching, the lock falls away.

rattle, goes the bag of jewels as I throw it over my shoulder.

Beep, Bweep, goes my walkie talkie.

“Mission accomplish” I say to my boss

2 thoughts on “Onomatopoeia and alliteration, break in poem- my 45th piece in 2017

  1. I like your poem a lot. I love action so naturally this poem appeals to me. I can see you have carefully chosen the words and thought about what you are saying. Good job!
    Keep writing,
    Indigo

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