100 word challenge 22, but where would we hide it all- my 47th piece in 2017

Deep in space, I wrestled with the controls, transporting stones with amazing powers. Galaxy Defence Inc was trying to get them hidden. “But where would we hide it all” they thought. They had multiple options: Doopar’s volcano, Dastron’s laser mountain or a duck (ducks are a lot different in my dimension). Eventually they decided on Rosin’s fortress. I was transporting them there but pirates attacked us, destroyed my security and now I’m on the run. I see a black hole and realise I have no choice but to fly straight into it. Even though I’m going to die I feel comforted that I’ve saved the universe.

One thought on “100 word challenge 22, but where would we hide it all- my 47th piece in 2017

  1. Hi Finn,

    This is a really imaginative story! I love your place names, and your comment about ducks is very funny. I really hope by some miracle you survive the black hole. I really like your use of punctuation: it’s very effective and makes the story easy to read and understand.

    Thanks for taking part in 100WC this week.
    Hannah (Team 100) -Birmingham, UK

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