100 word challenge 22, picture of a guy in a black cloak- my 48th piece in 2017

I crept as silently as a mouse my long black cloak dragged on the ground. I saw my target up ahead and bent down low. I slowly approached walking on a ground blanketed with leaves and twigs but not one of them snapped or rustled. I was just a meter away from my pray now, I looked at her so fragile and happy, well that is about to change. I was hiding right next to her but she couldn’t see me, the time to strike is now. I leaped and tackled her to the ground! “Finn” she shouted and I laugh, it’s always so funny when you scare your sister.

One thought on “100 word challenge 22, picture of a guy in a black cloak- my 48th piece in 2017

  1. Hello,
    I love your writing! Your descriptions are so detailed and bring your story to life. I love that he is teasing his sister-what a fun twist!

    Ms. Pfeiffer in St. Charles, Illinois
    Team 100wc

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